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Comic 113 - The Halfling vs. The Spider

13th May 2015, 9:14 PM in Chapter 2
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The Halfling vs. The Spider
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Author Notes:

13th May 2015, 9:14 PM
warriorneedsfood
It's one on one. I was very scared rolling up this fight. I didn't know if it was going to be the end of my comic or not.

Comments:

14th May 2015, 6:52 AM
ChilPhil
Come on Halfling beat that spider!

I wanted to suggest adding a sword/dagger to the halfling's right hand in the first panel. On the previous pages he had one in each hand.

In the 2nd panel, the Halfling throws the weapon from his right hand, and in the 4th panel he is holding a blade in his right. He should either be holding the weapon in his left hand, or shifting the weapon to his left for the reader to follow the action.
14th May 2015, 9:18 AM
warriorneedsfood
I think I'll take your first suggestion, but the rest would take too much revision for me to bother.
14th May 2015, 12:57 PM
William Montalvo
If those orcs are running away he's got a chance, maybe... as long as the spider doesn't poison him... and that he has some HP left...